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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Small and colorful

This is a picture of a small jumping spider that I had the luck of photographing.

Nov 06, 2011 at 02:12 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Small and colorful

I like the little guy. You did well bay keeping the eye's critically sharp, but I'd like him or her better with a bit more DOF. It's one of the difficult aspects of macro work.

Nov 06, 2011 at 03:56 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Small and colorful

Okay thanks, this was shot at around f/14.

Nov 06, 2011 at 04:03 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Small and colorful

Better than I have done with Macro captures of insects. Kind of cool, and again abstract in terms of the color-shapes of the OOF areas.
I think a tighter crop or closer capture would work better. Maybe placing "him" along a "third" on the right in a rule of thirds crop?
Scott

Nov 18, 2011 at 09:47 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Small and colorful

I will work on that and post an updated version here.

Nov 21, 2011 at 09:41 PM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Small and colorful

An updated version.

Edit: Changed the image out for one that I sharpened.

Nov 21, 2011 at 09:50 PM


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