farm machinery
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digitalbug30d
Registered: Apr 01, 2008
Total Posts: 860
Country: United States

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sassyii
Registered: Apr 20, 2005
Total Posts: 49
Country: Canada

Like the b&w conversion, and the composition is good. The bright background beyond the trees is a bit distracting. You might consider burning this a bit. Really like the relationship between the texture of the simple grass and the complexity of the farm equipment.



polarbare
Registered: Feb 20, 2008
Total Posts: 127
Country: United States

The piece that is growing out of the right side was distracting for me since it meshes with the fence. I also agree about the background, perhaps burning it and cropping some off the right side?



Scott Stoness
Registered: Sep 11, 2006
Total Posts: 3149
Country: Canada

For me there is too much happening and no clear message. The light area under the trees to right is distracting.

I think that this subject has lots of appeal but you need to focus more on one piece or have less depth (lower fstop) to create a main subject with other things around it to complement it.



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