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shapirophoto
Registered: Feb 20, 2008
Total Posts: 63
Country: United States

Calumet 4x5, 210mm Fujinon f/5.6, at f/16 on Provia 100F

Girlfriend and I went out for a day to take photographs. She used a Holga, I used primarily a 4x5 but also dabbled with the Hasselblad, will probably post more from the latter soon. Any C&C?

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rjcrespin08
Registered: Apr 20, 2008
Total Posts: 25
Country: United States

I get the idea but its not achieving the effect. Maybe being closer to wall or focussing on a particular object may be more pleasing. I would like to see more emphasis on the textures in the scene.

shapirophoto
Registered: Feb 20, 2008
Total Posts: 63
Country: United States

rjcrespin08 wrote:
I get the idea but its not achieving the effect. Maybe being closer to wall or focussing on a particular object may be more pleasing. I would like to see more emphasis on the textures in the scene.

Wait, focus more on the textures? How could this be accomplished without loosing the elements in the picture? Move closer? Specifically what would you leave out/include? Honestly your comment does little to help.

rjcrespin08
Registered: Apr 20, 2008
Total Posts: 25
Country: United States

quick examples:

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