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jrrhodes
Registered: May 29, 2008
Total Posts: 965
Country: United States

Thanks for looking

J.R.



douter
Registered: Mar 10, 2010
Total Posts: 11394
Country: United States

Nice capture here, but the fencepost on the right keeps drawing my eye away from the subject. Perhaps the post could be lightened more.
Douglas



Dougo
Registered: Feb 10, 2006
Total Posts: 5685
Country: Australia

Good separation of the girl from the background, one to look back on.

Cheers Ray



jrrhodes
Registered: May 29, 2008
Total Posts: 965
Country: United States

douter wrote:
Nice capture here, but the fencepost on the right keeps drawing my eye away from the subject. Perhaps the post could be lightened more.
Douglas


Thanks Douglas. I'll experiment with lightening or even removing that post.

J.R.



jrrhodes
Registered: May 29, 2008
Total Posts: 965
Country: United States

Dougo wrote:
Good separation of the girl from the background, one to look back on.

Cheers Ray



Thanks Ray!

J.R.



CDaescher
Registered: Jul 19, 2011
Total Posts: 11247
Country: Netherlands

A wonderful playful image, J.R.
You could crop from above and the right side to get her out of the center of the image.
Chris



drlouis
Registered: Sep 29, 2012
Total Posts: 43
Country: United States

I really like this, but I do agree the post and even the house in the background pull my eye a little. but honestly, not that much. I think it still works as is, although a bit of dodge and burn might help a bit?