#105 I Don't Want A Pickle...
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James Markus
Registered: Jul 20, 2005
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...I just want to ride my motorcycle.

EDIT
Wasn't happy with the first versions composition.

Foggy14
Registered: May 01, 2010
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... and I don't wanna die, just wanna ride on my motorcy ... cle.

Well done James!

mlenny
Registered: Apr 08, 2008
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nice slice ...

James Markus
Registered: Jul 20, 2005
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Thanks Jeff, and mlenny.

gregfountain
Registered: Jun 21, 2009
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Nicely done James...so many metaphors...I'm staying out of it

Greg

leighton w
Registered: Nov 12, 2010
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Anyway you slice it, it's a killer shot!

James Markus
Registered: Jul 20, 2005
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Thanks Greg and Leighton.

sbeme
Registered: Dec 23, 2003
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Excellent
and thanks for re-invoking Arlo
Scott

birdied
Registered: May 02, 2010
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Excellent shot !

Birdie

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