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deinfaces
Registered: Jul 20, 2012
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To use this image in color, I had to change the hue of some background elements.
Bob
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CRFTony
Registered: Sep 11, 2007
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I love your shots, but in this one she seems a little too far to the left of the frame. It almost makes my attention move from her to the objects on the right, as if they're deliberately in the shot. Perhaps a square crop would work better this time. Just a thought.



douter
Registered: Mar 10, 2010
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I agree with Tony, the color of the individuals on the right keep drawing my eye.
Douglas



PatrickE
Registered: Mar 07, 2010
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Perhaps B&W and a slight crop on the right?

Just a thought.

Pat



deinfaces
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Thank you, Tony, Douglas and Patrick. How about this...



PatrickE
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IMO .... Perfect!

Pat



douter
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Much better Bob!
Douglas



CRFTony
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Yes, I love the new version too!



deinfaces
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Thank you.

There is a recent string on this forum about negative comments, that provides both light and heat. I have been blessed with very helpful constructive criticism on this forum. Please keep it up! :-)



beetlefang
Registered: Nov 04, 2012
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Hi,

I'm no expert, but I love looking at each contributors art and learning vicariously through the string. IMHO, both of your pics look awesome.

Do you mind posting what kind of camera and lens you're using? (I'm guessing a 24-70 2.8?)

Oh and I love the earrings. They are cool.



deinfaces
Registered: Jul 20, 2012
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Thank you, Beetle! I was using the Nikon D90. The good news is that I used the NIKKOR 85mm f1.4 (@f2.8). The bad news is that it went back to LensRental.com, where it lives. I was hoping that Santa might bring one, but not this year.