family portrait at park
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Shootmegul
Registered: Apr 24, 2011
Total Posts: 90
Country: United Arab Emirates

Sharing few from a recent mini session shot in natural light at sunset









Thank You



Steady Hand
Registered: Dec 03, 2007
Total Posts: 15596
Country: United States

Hi,

Quick Comments: I like images 1 and 4.

In image 1 I would prefer to see more space in front of them, not behind them. There is an object behind him that gets my eye attention, looks like a trashcan or bin or something like that. ?

Don't care for the low contrast face/eyes on man in image 2.

Don't care for the composition (head chop of man) in image 3.

Hope these comments help you.



brianclary
Registered: Sep 12, 2012
Total Posts: 170
Country: United States

Great work...I think #1 is the most flattering photograph of her, the way her jawline is presented with that tilt of her neck. For some reason, the shadows on her face in #2 don't seem to be nearly as flattering, just a personal opinion...others may completely disagree



Shootmegul
Registered: Apr 24, 2011
Total Posts: 90
Country: United Arab Emirates

thanks
image 2. there is a problem that i tried but couldn't fix and steady hand you picked it up the man. somehow I had a sort of a flair/low contrast thingy. and if i play with contrast there I was messing up the lower half of face



Vince Muehe
Registered: May 05, 2007
Total Posts: 80
Country: United States

On the color shots, a little shot of fill flash may have helped bring the subjects standout from the bright background. They seem to be a bit shadowed to me. Nice job, none the less.