Smile
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parokhodov
Registered: May 19, 2008
Total Posts: 273
Country: Russia

http://cs405931.userapi.com/v405931965/3b64/zCtVp66pZE8.jpg

Canon EOS 5d, canon 100 mm, 2.8



douter
Registered: Mar 10, 2010
Total Posts: 11405
Country: United States

Nice work, but if it's all about the smile, I might wjten her teeth a bit, they are coming across a little yellow on my monitor.
Douglas



parokhodov
Registered: May 19, 2008
Total Posts: 273
Country: Russia

A little bit yellow is a tone of this photo. So really white teeths looks unnormal here I think. Thanks



Big Appa
Registered: Sep 23, 2005
Total Posts: 1130
Country: United States

This is beautiful. Do not touch the teeth, over whitened teeth will ruin this one.

Ed



Andre Labonte
Registered: Dec 21, 2005
Total Posts: 13497
Country: United States

Perfect just as it is. Beautiful shot



stevemaller
Registered: Dec 27, 2002
Total Posts: 886
Country: United States

Stunning. I missed your work here. I always enjoy it. And clearly the most beautiful women in Russia do, too.



parokhodov
Registered: May 19, 2008
Total Posts: 273
Country: Russia

thanks, guys



DaveOls
Registered: Sep 30, 2011
Total Posts: 1408
Country: United States

This is one beautiful model. Hope to see more of her.



bortoni
Registered: Apr 23, 2010
Total Posts: 384
Country: United States

I would whiten her teeth a bit. Look at her eyes, they are white. So it's not the toning of the image as a whole.



parokhodov
Registered: May 19, 2008
Total Posts: 273
Country: Russia

bortoni, ok)



ds211
Registered: Oct 11, 2012
Total Posts: 20
Country: United States

Nice image. The "little yellow tone in the image", I believe comes from her teeth. If you whiten them as bortoni said, like her eyes it changes the image quite a bit.

http://lifesupplycorp.com/images/teeth.jpg



a.RodriguezPix
Registered: Oct 31, 2011
Total Posts: 2237
Country: United States

or she could wear a nice velvet pink shirt



ESC in KC
Registered: Dec 26, 2005
Total Posts: 2728
Country: United States

I tend to notice the contrast in coloring between teeth and eyes, and in this case, the whites of the eyes make those teeth look awfully dingy yellow. I'd suggest a slight whitening job too.



Jim Rickards
Registered: Dec 02, 2003
Total Posts: 10406
Country: Germany

Love the smile.

Consider cropping off the cleavage on the bottom. Keep the attention up top.