At the Playground - C&C Please
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mpmoto
Registered: Oct 31, 2011
Total Posts: 32
Country: United States

I took these last weekend when hanging out with my family at the playground. Please give your C&C.
Gear used: Nikon 85 f/1.8G, D3s
Minor adjustments in LR4

Thanks

Mariusz



M Lucca
Registered: Oct 19, 2011
Total Posts: 1027
Country: Holy See

they are adorable.

Take it easy with the vignetting.



mpmoto
Registered: Oct 31, 2011
Total Posts: 32
Country: United States

thank you ... sometimes I just can't stop myself from pushing vigneting a bit mor than I should ... but I personally like the look it gives the pictures



Jim Rickards
Registered: Dec 02, 2003
Total Posts: 10045
Country: Germany

Nice set. Each shot has the child isolated with DOF. Good use of the playground equipment to give you frames for the pics. Well done.



tyasa81
Registered: Jan 27, 2010
Total Posts: 188
Country: Indonesia

Good looking children, framed nicely.. Agree with about the vignette.. The way you present the pics really emphasized them.. Nice set



ct8282
Registered: Nov 25, 2011
Total Posts: 2198
Country: United Kingdom

mpmoto wrote:
thank you ... sometimes I just can't stop myself from pushing vigneting a bit mor than I should ... but I personally like the look it gives the pictures


+1. For the heavier than usual vignetting works extremely well for these lovely pics.



NoelSal
Registered: Oct 31, 2012
Total Posts: 54
Country: United States

Vignetting not too bad pull back a tad. I dig the images also.



mpmoto
Registered: Oct 31, 2011
Total Posts: 32
Country: United States

Thank you all for looking and your kind words. I appreciate the critique and advice as well.



crabcakes
Registered: Aug 28, 2004
Total Posts: 159
Country: United States

Very nice.