Yaya S. in white dress
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mjohns
Registered: Oct 26, 2012
Total Posts: 22
Country: United States

I will continue update some portrait collection I took, some of them was taken last year:P

This is a very early collection that I just started learning photography.

#1

Flickr 上 M_Johns_MG_1930s

#2

Flickr 上 M_Johns_MG_1882s

#3

Flickr 上 M_Johns_MG_1955s

#4

Flickr 上 M_Johns_MG_2000sf

#5

Flickr 上 M_Johns_MG_1991sf

#6

Flickr 上 M_Johns_MG_1990s

comments are all welcome
thanks all



liamh
Registered: Jul 24, 2005
Total Posts: 3703
Country: United Kingdom

#2 is my pick with #3 second. She is a beauty for sure.



Paul.K
Registered: Jan 14, 2009
Total Posts: 957
Country: United States

1. Needs some punch or pop. Slight tilt. The reflection and door are nice. The door has a nice texture that I might have utilized more instead of the weird brick.

2. Nice lighting and tones. Very inviting feeling to this photo. Maybe wouldn't have her hands disappear into her dress but then again, they are in a natural position.

3. Fantastic. Nice bold colors and good separation of your subject. Great expression.

4. Looks like she is saluting. Awkward crop/composition. Hair is a little too disorganized.

5. Upside down Not bad.

6. Sleeping? Not sure I like the concept.



Good variety of expressions and poses.



mjohns
Registered: Oct 26, 2012
Total Posts: 22
Country: United States

thanks
very useful



Paul.K
Registered: Jan 14, 2009
Total Posts: 957
Country: United States

No problem. Keep posting!



Michaelparris
Registered: Sep 15, 2008
Total Posts: 2361
Country: United States

Dont like the ones where she is laying down....Love the others but do not like the backgrounds