A couple of weeks ago doing some senior pics.

1. my eye takes me to the green plant. try to darken that area. dont cut her fingers.

2. i use to love taking photos on rr tracks but find it harder to pose and lots of distraction and unsafe. my eye takes me to the top right of this photo. consider cropping tighter and tilt doesn't look right with this photo.

3. same as 1. try not to cut her foot. her face can use some shine. her right hand seems awkwardly placed.

4. best of the set. a little soft but i like the framing.

thanks for sharing.