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ben egbert Registered: Jan 31, 2005 Total Posts: 3754 Country: United States |
Trying to articulate what I look for in a landscape. Other styles would be weighted differently especially in the image quality and composition areas. I would really like a critique of this. |
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Camperjim Registered: Oct 17, 2011 Total Posts: 1310 Country: United States |
To me creating an image with impact and interest is what we strive for. We might also include the wow factor which means the interest and impact peak due to special lighting or other special elements. If I only wanted images which include a wow aspect I would only have a few rare keepers. I am content to also capture beautiful scenery and other images which reflect more commonplace experience. |
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ben egbert Registered: Jan 31, 2005 Total Posts: 3754 Country: United States |
Hi Jim. |
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Camperjim Registered: Oct 17, 2011 Total Posts: 1310 Country: United States |
I can think of many examples where a landscape might be improved with selective focus and /or limited dof. Maybe a landscape with foreground flowers and a moose, a midground with a lake and trees and a background mountain. The mountain might give a sense of place but limited sharpness and maybe even some burning could create a feeling of distance and keep the viewers attention on the foreground and midground elements. |
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Camperjim Registered: Oct 17, 2011 Total Posts: 1310 Country: United States |
I am also remembering many of my images that appeared flat because the exposure and sharpness were too even. These images would be improved with better sense of scale and perspective if I had used selective focus and probably also desaturated and darkened the background |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5883 Country: New Zealand |
Great images have a gestalt that is greater than the sum of their parts. I rate subject and composition as the two most important aspects of an image. Subject is what it intends to say and composition is the structure to say it. A great subject and composition can sometime work despite technical flaws, even significant flaws - for MOST people. For picky photographers minor technical flaws can ruin even the greatest images, but the great majority of viewers don't react that way. A perfect rendition of a scene that lacks emotional spirit or speaks in a visually pedantic voice can be no better than a ho-hum experience. |
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ben egbert Registered: Jan 31, 2005 Total Posts: 3754 Country: United States |
Thanks Aunti, good stuff and I will figure out how to get that into what I am working toward. |
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ben egbert Registered: Jan 31, 2005 Total Posts: 3754 Country: United States |
Here is an example of a subtle landscape. This one does not say wow at all. It dose not really come into its own until viewed large so you would need to take my word that it is one of my better images of the year. |
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sadja Registered: Nov 05, 2002 Total Posts: 285 Country: United States |
I'm going think about this for a while before responding. |
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ben egbert Registered: Jan 31, 2005 Total Posts: 3754 Country: United States |
My website is not getting any feedback so I wanted to post this here before I included it, if I even do. |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5883 Country: New Zealand |
Again, for a less static composition, a bit more foreground and less sky would help. |
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ben egbert Registered: Jan 31, 2005 Total Posts: 3754 Country: United States |
I often crop 16x9 to move the image off center because most landscapes end up centered when shot. |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5883 Country: New Zealand |
To illustrate what it would be like to have more foreground I borrowed bits from the existing foreground to expand it - mostly with clone stamp and context aware fill. |
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ben egbert Registered: Jan 31, 2005 Total Posts: 3754 Country: United States |
I finally figured out where you got the parts, now I need to figure out how to do content aware fill. |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5883 Country: New Zealand |
Easy in PS CS5 or S6. |
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ben egbert Registered: Jan 31, 2005 Total Posts: 3754 Country: United States |
Thanks Aunti. I missed this one for sure. Great tip. |
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sadja Registered: Nov 05, 2002 Total Posts: 285 Country: United States |
A new sun has not made me smarter or vested me with more energy. |
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ben egbert Registered: Jan 31, 2005 Total Posts: 3754 Country: United States |
Hi Sadja: Once a pixel peeper always a pixel peeper I guess. Or perhaps a natural result of being profoundly nearsighted. Or maybe the training of 50 years staring at a drawing board or CAD/CAM screen. Who knows. |
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sadja Registered: Nov 05, 2002 Total Posts: 285 Country: United States |
This certainly has impact, but why do you consider it of lower instrinsic value? |