Critique wanted
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Julian Nell
Registered: Feb 14, 2012
Total Posts: 1012
Country: United States

Here is a shot that I would like to get critiqued. Thanks




cgardner
Registered: Nov 18, 2002
Total Posts: 9376
Country: United States

Put a neat bug on the end of the leaf and it would be killer. With out the bug its nice abstract study of form and color in nature but it doesn't have the same "wow!" factor.

What you could do to add some interest is selectively sharpen the brown tip to make it contrast more in texture like it does in color:







Julian Nell
Registered: Feb 14, 2012
Total Posts: 1012
Country: United States

I actually can't selectively sharpen but I wish I could be cause your's looks better.

Julian



AuntiPode
Registered: Aug 05, 2008
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Country: New Zealand

Ok color. Ok shape. Not much subject interest.



Julian Nell
Registered: Feb 14, 2012
Total Posts: 1012
Country: United States

Thanks, there was a very small bug on this bunch of surprise lilies, I think that's what they're called, but anyways there was a very small bug that I just couldn't get focus on but wish know that I had.

Julian