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Bob Jarman Registered: Feb 04, 2007 Total Posts: 4758 Country: United States |
Some candids from Westside Nutt Club's Fall Festival, Evansville, IN. This single activity is the annual fundraiser for all charitable, service, and volunteer organizations in the Evansville area. |
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sbeme Registered: Dec 23, 2003 Total Posts: 14810 Country: United States |
These are fun! |
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Bob Jarman Registered: Feb 04, 2007 Total Posts: 4758 Country: United States |
more... |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5891 Country: New Zealand |
They do say "Americana", don't they. |
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Bob Jarman Registered: Feb 04, 2007 Total Posts: 4758 Country: United States |
Hard working, playing mid-west folks. Many live in rural communities and farm. Others have migrated to factory work, however that work is gradually going elsewhere, Mexico or off-shore. |
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RustyBug Registered: Feb 02, 2009 Total Posts: 9422 Country: United States |
Diggin' the toning on #2 and the capture on the "wild woman" (daughter ??) |
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sbeme Registered: Dec 23, 2003 Total Posts: 14810 Country: United States |
I still think the second is the best standalone image. |
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Bob Jarman Registered: Feb 04, 2007 Total Posts: 4758 Country: United States |
Thanks Kent, |
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sbeme Registered: Dec 23, 2003 Total Posts: 14810 Country: United States |
BTW, I think the toning choices are excellent (sans chips) |
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Bob Jarman Registered: Feb 04, 2007 Total Posts: 4758 Country: United States |
Thanks Karen and Scott, |
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Bob Jarman Registered: Feb 04, 2007 Total Posts: 4758 Country: United States |
sbeme wrote: |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5891 Country: New Zealand |
Is the sixth entry at the following URL what you have in mind? |
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cgardner Registered: Nov 18, 2002 Total Posts: 9311 Country: United States |
The first shot works better for me cropped in tighter on just the two foreground figures because the sign and and scene on the left in the background are distractions and the woman in the background isn't flattered much by the photo due to her expression. I also made a middle slider correction in Levels to pull up the shaded faces... ![]() In the second shot all the space above her does add much because its mostly blank wall. The same subject from the second set works better because of the direct angle and the posters on top creating composition balance and context. The third shot would have been better if a bit wider without the chips chopped by the crop on top. In the shot of the bikes in (last shot) I'd suggest a tighter crop. In the original the content in the background and foreground are more or less in balance creating a ping-pong situation of competing centers of interest. A tighter crop shifts the emphasis to the more interesting foreground for me.. ![]() My eye wanders back to the couple in the background, but then having nowhere else to the right to look I get pulled back for another look at the foreground. That dynamic works because the parallax put the couple behind very close horizontally to the couple on the bike. |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5891 Country: New Zealand |
The white bar and shelf on the right intrude and the background clutter also detracts from the first. A wider aperture would help and perhaps some PP fiddling: |
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Bob Jarman Registered: Feb 04, 2007 Total Posts: 4758 Country: United States |
Great re-works AuntiPode, thanks for your time and assistance. Yes, I should have had a "busy" filter mounted |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5891 Country: New Zealand |
Beats me. At best I'm an SEP dilettante. |
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dmacmillan Registered: Nov 03, 2007 Total Posts: 3979 Country: United States |
Do you know the lady and the girl in the first photo? |
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Bob Jarman Registered: Feb 04, 2007 Total Posts: 4758 Country: United States |
no, passing strangers |
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dmacmillan Registered: Nov 03, 2007 Total Posts: 3979 Country: United States |
I'm trying to figure out what would compel you to take that photo. |