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sbeme Registered: Dec 23, 2003 Total Posts: 14810 Country: United States |
The title to this weeks Weekly Assignment. |
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cgardner Registered: Nov 18, 2002 Total Posts: 9306 Country: United States |
I think you are mixing up your metaphors with the sepia toning to try to make the photo look old when its the bike that's old and abandoned you found and photographed yesterday. The focal point for me is the bike but I find it getting lost in all the trees and the structure competing with it. As is my SOP I cropped in tight on the bike, expanded the frame outward and stopped when I found the background context trumping it's impact and got this... ![]() |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5886 Country: New Zealand |
There are days i feel like that. |
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oldrattler Registered: Aug 04, 2009 Total Posts: 3928 Country: United States |
Scott I like the image without the frame.. |
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pinn8 Registered: Sep 12, 2009 Total Posts: 60 Country: United States |
I could take or leave the frame, but I prefer the original crop and the vignette. |
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mrchile Registered: Oct 28, 2009 Total Posts: 1918 Country: United States |
I don't like any of this Scott. There's enough competition this week already. |
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oldrattler Registered: Aug 04, 2009 Total Posts: 3928 Country: United States |
Scott; Had to play with this.. Hope you do not mind.. |
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sbeme Registered: Dec 23, 2003 Total Posts: 14810 Country: United States |
I dont mind at all. |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5886 Country: New Zealand |
Of course, if I like it, it's the kiss of death on WA. I almost never agree with the winning image. |
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sbeme Registered: Dec 23, 2003 Total Posts: 14810 Country: United States |
Hope you hate it Karen. I mean REALLY HATE IT! |
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Bob Jarman Registered: Feb 04, 2007 Total Posts: 4754 Country: United States |
Think somewhere near the original works best for me - good luck with the competition! |
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tom lozinski Registered: Jul 14, 2011 Total Posts: 78 Country: United States |
I like the original too. Looks like a good entry. I was thinking maybe trying vertical tilt correction make the bottom (bike) bigger in the frame, not sure if it would work though since it looks like you're already shooting at an upward angle. |
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AuntiPode Registered: Aug 05, 2008 Total Posts: 5886 Country: New Zealand |
With the Unibomber in prison, the old shack went to pot.... |