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| Re: C&C on Studio Lighting |
You've done pretty well imo. Some comments:
Quite a blue cast but one click in lightroom will remove that ok
You have a gradient on the background, if that wasn't what you wanted light the background separately
There are no catchlights from your main light and from the shadows I suspect is pretty far off axis which the big size of the plm masks to some extent. Your fill light is also quite far off axis (uneven catchlights), to fill the shadows under the cheeks more get it closer to the camera.
I'd suggest using much harder light to learn which will show up the effects of placement very quickly, with light as soft as this you can get away with just about anything.