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jeremy_clay
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As wicked as the winter shot was, I outdid it with this wedding set. I know these images are pretty near perfect, but for humours sake, give me your worst crit, FM. Tell me what you don't like about the photos, call them sh*t, call me sh*t, nothing is off limits aside from a few simple rules:

a) no personal attacks about the clients
b) no bi*ching about how many their are

No comments? I can only assume that y'all agree with me then (and who wouldn't??)

Enjoy!



First off, this amazing shot:

http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/jclay7.jpg



http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/_MG_2620-Edit.jpg

2 Gents
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/WB1G6736-Edit.jpg

b
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1028-Edit.jpg

c
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1040-Edit.jpg

d
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1901-Edit.jpg

3 Ladies

http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1092-Edit.jpg

b
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1159-Edit.jpg

c
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1241-Edit.jpg

d
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1235-Edit.jpg

e (the Groom was a Canadian Olympian)

http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/_MG_2146-Edit.jpg

Wedding

4
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1384-Edit.jpg

5
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/_MG_0950-Edit.jpg

6
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1401-Edit.jpg

7
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/WB1G6916-Edit.jpg

8 Certificate signing

http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/WB1G6989-Edit.jpg

0 Married, [in]formals

http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/WB1G7205-Edit.jpg

10
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1687-Edit.jpg

11
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1738-Edit.jpg

12
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1773-Edit.jpg

13
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/_MG_1155-Edit.jpg

14
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1959-Edit.jpg

15
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/WB1G7246-Edit.jpg

16
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/WB1G7271-Edit.jpg

17
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/WB1G7282-Edit.jpg

18 Cute moment

http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/WB1G7295-Edit.jpg

19
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/WB1G7311-Edit.jpg


20 Reception

http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_1839-Edit.jpg

21
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_2145-Edit.jpg

22 Awesome 2nd dress:
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_2151-Edit.jpg

23
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/_MG_3023-Edit.jpg

24
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_2178-Edit.jpg

25
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_2228-Edit.jpg

26 This man kept the party jumpin' like few I've ever seen. AMAZING.

http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_4383-Edit.jpg

27
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_4393-Edit.jpg

28 Norman Rockwell
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_4430-Edit.jpg

29 Singing
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_4493-Edit.jpg

30
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_4485-Edit.jpg

31
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/_MG_1524-Edit.jpg

32
http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_2355-Edit.jpg

33 Fin:

http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/IMG_4427-Edit.jpg

Bonus shot for the ladies (and the dudes, if that's the angle of your swagger)

http://www.jclayphoto.com/v1site_images/galleries/gallery255/_MG_2655-Edit.jpg




Sep 22, 2010 at 05:24 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · ---- Best Wedding Fotos Ever Inside ----


man what a rocking set..
#28 is just fabulous.. love it !



Sep 22, 2010 at 05:35 PM
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I should also point out that FM's own Steve H (forget his usertag) seconded for me on this one, so I'm sure he'll try and hog some glory (but seriously, great working with you sir)


Sep 22, 2010 at 05:37 PM
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Bahahahaha I had a blast too. Wicked set BTW.

2d and 17 FTW.



Sep 22, 2010 at 05:39 PM
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Great work!!

Some questions;

What kind of ISO settings/shutter speeds were you using in the church?
From the last pic (you I presume) I can see an 85MM L, either a 24(or 28) - 70, is that a Fisheye in your hands? What are the three bodies you're using and was that your entire set up for the whole wedding? i.e. did you use any other lenses? What sort of off camera flash (if any) were you using? Any light modifiers on the flash units?

I thought the whole thing captured the day EXTREMELY well, I love the whole set and if I were the clients I think I would be thrilled. Too many winners to list, if I HAD to pick? 15,18,19,22,30,31 and I especially like 5, just because that moment when the bride first enters the church was captured so well.

Way to go!

Edited by Steve Tinetti on Sep 22, 2010 at 10:27 PM · View previous versions



Sep 22, 2010 at 05:43 PM
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21, 31, 32 & E rock, congrats


Sep 22, 2010 at 05:47 PM
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To many good ones to say.

Awesome Idea.
[4] Awesome.
[7] Framing and front bokeh is perfect. Again. I envy your indoor tones. So good.

[11] Color on 11 feels a bit off the others, but I like the shot.
[12] My fav, really awesome pose.

[16] Nice expression, but not as strong as the others (tough competition…)
[17] Awesome detail, nice PP (Grain added??)
[18] Slightly abusive backlight, but I like it!
[28]! So much stuff going on!
[31] Amazing.
[32] Color contrast! I am assuming they had the venue lit?

I Think you need a few more camera straps if this is you on the bottom… At least are brand-neutral…

Really inspiring work to a new wedding photog such as myself.



Sep 22, 2010 at 05:50 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · ---- Best Wedding Fotos Ever Inside ----


The shot where there' the one dude in clear focus and the rest is blurrelicious.... Q: did u jus photochop that or am I looking at a crop from a frame where he wiz in the center and you zoomed while shooting at a relatively slow shutter? I'm leaning to ps 'cause the door is otherwise ridiculously sharp ... Not sure it'd be possible with the camera trick.

Great set overall. Only crit is that aside from the first shot many of the others seem to have a bit of a faked "summery" look. I see some shots where you apparently blew out the windows... I'm guessing to hide the snow outside.



Sep 22, 2010 at 06:10 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · ---- Best Wedding Fotos Ever Inside ----


Get rid of the dude in red in #11
All really gorgeous as ever, more fun moments than your other sets.

They will be stoked.



Sep 22, 2010 at 06:14 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · ---- Best Wedding Fotos Ever Inside ----


They all look kinda pool party to me...



Sep 22, 2010 at 06:15 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · ---- Best Wedding Fotos Ever Inside ----


morganb4 wrote:
Get rid of the dude in red in #11


Where's f*ing Waldo. hahah I missed him.



Sep 22, 2010 at 06:23 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · ---- Best Wedding Fotos Ever Inside ----


honestly they are better than 99% of wedding photos taken but certainly not your best work.
Do I see 3 or 4 cams? wow
Overall the processing is consistent and on brand and everyone looks darn near perfect so things are looking pretty good I would say.

Doug



Sep 22, 2010 at 06:35 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · ---- Best Wedding Fotos Ever Inside ----


#24. The moms will love you forever.

Great set. Solid work. The bride looks like she was really into expressing herself.



Sep 22, 2010 at 06:58 PM
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You rocked it. Awesome!



Sep 22, 2010 at 07:09 PM
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Jeremy,

These are very nice and I am positive the bride and groom will absolutely love these.
I can only comment on the first image, the others are too good for me to critique.

The size of the couple is inconsistent with the over all image.You need foot prints in the snow, and her dress would have dragged across the snow. There would have been snow on his jacket.

The exposure doesn't match. They should have posed as if they were cold and shivering.
or leaning into driven snow, (then of course slant the snow fall direction).

Where are the white wolves, and polar bears?

Other than those minor nits cool image.

Sam



Sep 22, 2010 at 07:14 PM
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If I had to critique them I'd say the skin tones are a touch cold for my liking, but this is consistent with your other photos you post and I'm sure your choice of colour is deliberate.

That aside great work.





Sep 22, 2010 at 08:33 PM
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Great set. 14 is a real winner for me, though I am seeing a little bit of haloing to the left side of the groom. 13 is very cute. I can't read your humour, are you joking about that first image, I'm guessing yes? Technically I see no problems, but I find it to be painfully cheesy - it looks like a scene from 'The Snowman'.

Other images I really like - 33, 25, 29, 4 (killer moment), 13, c (boys and girls), 23 and 25.

As slight negatives, I'm finding 16 to be a little over exposed. 26 does nothing for me, I can't find the focus of action - I'm looking but can't tell what's going on. I'm also not digging the processing on 5 and 28. All in all though, a tremendous set. The standout for me is 14, but I wonder if you can minimise the slight halo?



Sep 22, 2010 at 08:45 PM
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The thread title fits #28 perfectly. Great photograph.


Sep 22, 2010 at 10:09 PM
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just my opinion, but an incredible set of photos. the best i've seen on this forum. clean, well thought out and not gimmicky / trendy / now-e.

however, # 14 and 19 don't seem like you... # 14 seems like a current fad photo, with a compostion that detracts from your normal great compositions / timing.



Sep 22, 2010 at 11:13 PM
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I really wish I had your skill in wedding photography.


Sep 23, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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