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p.1 #1 · Olivia (NSFW)

As always thanks for looking! C&C welcome!!

Feb 08, 2010 at 03:58 PM

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p.1 #2 · Olivia (NSFW)

Nice crisp images, nice bokeh...

With #1 I find myself looking at the tree bark, eyes, jewelry, hips in that order seems a little busy and they combine to make me wonder whats going on...

#2 Nice image if they are for the young lady Im sure she will love them... Here the light at the top of the head is a bit distracting (maybe shoot in shadow or indirect light next time ??) and with the fill flash I'm not a big fan of the shadows cast from the flowers on the face and the flash doesn't seem to be in harmony with the other natural light... maybe if it was a stop or 1.5 stops less on he flash ?? OR was it a reflector simply reflecting too much light given the angle of the shadows ??

Hope Im not too critical but in offering C&C I find it helps me with the exact same issues when I shoot :-)

Feb 08, 2010 at 05:09 PM

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The crop / pose on (1) makes it look like she has a very large belly / midsection.

greg

Feb 08, 2010 at 05:26 PM

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p.1 #4 · Olivia (NSFW)

Good critique by Burk. And these are nice photos.

#1. I'm distracted too. My eyes go back and forth from eyes to bra and take in the tree bark along the way. The tummy line could make one think of a pregnancy bulge, but it's likely just how she is standing. An unfortunate optical illusion that only a few will notice.

#2. The flower shadow didn't bother me, but the bright hair was a distraction. The eyes are 'half hidden', not sure why/how this is seen like this.

Lots of minor nits mentioned above. Bottom line its still very nice.

Feb 08, 2010 at 05:27 PM

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gheller wrote:
The crop / pose on (1) makes it look like she has a very large belly / midsection.

greg

This...

Feb 09, 2010 at 12:49 AM

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p.1 #6 · Olivia (NSFW)

Thanks everyone for their C&C, really appreciated!

Feb 09, 2010 at 02:00 PM

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p.1 #7 · Olivia (NSFW)

Nice shots, I like the colors and saturation.

Feb 10, 2010 at 12:01 AM

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p.1 #8 · Olivia (NSFW)

jfinite wrote:
Nice shots, I like the colors and saturation.

Thanks mate, appreciate it!

Feb 10, 2010 at 06:07 PM

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