sevan pulurian
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 p.1 #10 · Lingerie football league LA vs. SD. SHUT OU!! | |
To be perfectly honest, only one of these images really does anything for me (the pretty girls not withstanding).
1. looks underexposed to me and has a weird tone. It's also just a boring moment as can be seen by many of the faces in the background.
A: (Looks a tad underexposed and they were warming up and it was very cold and I can't control the expression on the girls faces.)
2. No faces and empty stands.
A: (Sorry they would not allow the media behind the players benches so it was either from there or the other end of the field but would of had to reach farther. As for the Empty stand this is only a 50yrd field and it was in the coliseum which seat thousands and the LFL doesn't pull that much viewers, they had roughly 500-700 fans and they only used 3-4 sections of the lower portion on one side of the field only.)
They only used the right side portion not much viewers to fill the entire place.
3. had potential but a terrible background ruins it
A: (Once again, media was limited to the area around the field.)
4. No faces.
A: (I see you point, should of gotten down a bit more.)
5. Is there a ball somewhere?
A: (Yes, unfortunately the player with her back has the ball.)
6. I get what you're trying to do but it just doesn't work for me. Too much dead space. Might work better if you crop below the Chevron sign.
A: (Thought I would try to get the LFL sign in the back ground.)
7. The only one I like. A nice expression on her face and clean background. It just needs to be cropped tighter.
A: (I see you point on a tighter crop.)
8. Nice expression but has that straight-on camera P&S shoot look to it and I'm not really sure what's going on here. Why are they all together like that? Are they about to take a team photo or something?
A: (Sorry I have another shot of the whole team, but this was after they on the game they all go together for a group photo with the media flashing away.)
Sorry if this comes across as harsh, just trying to give you my critique as honest as I can. It's this kind of feedback that makes your photos better.
- Chris
Thanks for you opinion and critique.
Sevan 
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