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p.1 #1 · Nude at night

Click here: http://www.srsfineartphotography.com/Other/Misc/10734829_yt9wJ#752404507_75TvZ

Dec 29, 2009 at 06:17 PM

Michael Sessio
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p.1 #2 · Nude at night

the poor photoshop clipping is very distracting.

Dec 29, 2009 at 06:33 PM

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p.1 #3 · Nude at night

The water above the subject looks horrible, like you used the clone tool against the edge of the shot, but multiple times. Or am I seeing something else?

Dec 29, 2009 at 06:36 PM

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Nice web site, Michael. Cloning or clipping? I am not sure what you mean by "poor clipping".
Stephen

Dec 29, 2009 at 06:39 PM

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p.1 #5 · Nude at night

Jason, you are correct. I rushed it.

Dec 29, 2009 at 06:40 PM

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p.1 #6 · Nude at night

This shot has potential but it appears you have done some cutouts and cloning that are too obvious when you look at your full size image. You need to make sure that if you do a cut out you zoom in when doing so get it trimmed down so only your subject is left no extra background from the original shot. When you drop that on to another layer you should merge it with that layer and do a slight blur just around the edges of your cutout to make it blend. When cloning be careful not to create a distracting pattern where you see the same rock or ripple or whatever over & over where people will notice you cloned it. if you do a good job cloning and blending your elements no one will notice you did anything but produce a good picture.

Dec 29, 2009 at 07:05 PM

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p.1 #7 · Nude at night

Thanks, Skipper - useful advice

Dec 29, 2009 at 08:41 PM

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Dec 30, 2009 at 04:23 AM

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p.1 #9 · Nude at night

steph11478 wrote:
Nice web site, Michael. Cloning or clipping? I am not sure what you mean by "poor clipping".
Stephen

Thanks Steph,

I meant the edges where you composited the image in were pretty obvious. The b&w is better but still has issues with a glow around the model head,. The way you airbrushed the darkness into the fabric on the right looks odd. Also the transition from the textile into the water looks completely fake.

The model is nice. It just seems you're working too hard to create an image that just isn't going to happen.

Dec 30, 2009 at 07:50 AM

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p.1 #10 · Nude at night

Yap there's a glow around her face and considering the lighting on her, I would expect her "reflection" in the water to be different (but I might be wrong )

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Dec 30, 2009 at 08:31 AM

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