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Dneufarth
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p.1 #1 · Sometimes canvas is good.


As always C&C is greatly appreciated. Thanks, Derek








Nov 21, 2009 at 12:16 AM
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p.1 #2 · Sometimes canvas is good.


I like it!

Nov 21, 2009 at 03:43 AM
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p.1 #3 · Sometimes canvas is good.


I don't like it.

Unappealing "model."



Nov 21, 2009 at 05:15 AM
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p.1 #4 · Sometimes canvas is good.


Todd wrote:
I like it!

Thanks for the comment


Nov 21, 2009 at 12:37 PM
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p.1 #5 · Sometimes canvas is good.


pawlowski6132 wrote:
I don't like it.

Unappealing "model."


While I appreciate your opinion, I don't think that such a comment about a model in this forum is appropriate. And I was more looking for C&C on the image. I would very much like to hear what you have to say about the image. Thanks for looking, Derek


Nov 21, 2009 at 12:40 PM
 



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p.1 #6 · Sometimes canvas is good.


A nice looking young woman.
Now about the photo. The lighting is good, the color is good.

And while others may object to her right shoulder and arm position, I like it.
She has a slightly long (but very pretty) face and the angularity of her pose in the photo takes advantage of this.

Good job all around, IMO.

Big Appa


Nov 21, 2009 at 01:34 PM
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A good solid portrait with a nice pose and strangely, an appealing expression by the model. The colors of the models hair and clothes are well complimented by the background.

My only nit is that her left breast fights for attention with the face. The straght lines of the shirt, as well as its cut, make a connection to the face and the half-revealed breast. I'm not sure how to avoid it given the pose and choice of clothes, but it is there. Modifying the pose slightly might get rid of the issue.


Nov 21, 2009 at 01:37 PM
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p.1 #8 · Sometimes canvas is good.


I would tone down the highlights. I feel that the bright highlights are fighting with the classic canvas.

Nov 21, 2009 at 02:02 PM
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p.1 #9 · Sometimes canvas is good.


A tad overexposed. Think it needs softer lighting. Try a larger light source, or put a 4x6 diffusion panel in front of it.

Nov 21, 2009 at 02:39 PM
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