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daverowe
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p.1 #1 · @ the tracks


so i was scheduled to shoot two girls at one of my favorite locations out in the country. they ended up being two hours late. haha, so we only had time to shoot close. here is one i just edited real quick. would love to know what you think of the lighting and color. C & C welcomed and much appreciated many more to come soon from the shoot. thanks, david.

1. http://daverowephotography.zenfolio.com/img/v5/p622106914-4.jpg

2. http://daverowephotography.zenfolio.com/img/v8/p527283348-4.jpg

thanks for looking

Edited on Nov 20, 2009 at 01:23 AM · View previous versions



Nov 19, 2009 at 10:41 PM
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p.1 #2 · @ the tracks


Color looks balanced on my monitor, but the blouse burns into the sky on the gal that is standing but you can probably burn that back in. Standing gal could also use a bit of fill in the face as I see it.


Nov 19, 2009 at 10:50 PM
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p.1 #3 · @ the tracks


thanks. i'll see what i can do. just added another one. not sure if i like it though :/


Nov 20, 2009 at 01:24 AM
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p.1 #4 · @ the tracks


i like the second one. but i wonder if the sky can be less bright.


Nov 20, 2009 at 03:54 AM
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p.1 #5 · @ the tracks


oh cute girls too, worth the 2 hrs wait i hope!


Nov 20, 2009 at 03:55 AM
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p.1 #6 · @ the tracks


#1 for me.
would like to see some more aswell.



Nov 20, 2009 at 08:17 AM
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p.1 #7 · @ the tracks


thanks guys. more to come soon


Nov 20, 2009 at 05:07 PM
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p.1 #8 · @ the tracks


I think they're competing too much with that building to the left. For whatever reason, I want to see a tighter shot of the girls. I'm not sure what the shot is trying to say.

They are very attractive, but not so sure I would have waited two hours for anyone. I am interested to see what other shots you have.



Nov 20, 2009 at 09:01 PM
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p.1 #9 · @ the tracks


What exactly is the lower girl supposed to be doing?


Nov 21, 2009 at 07:42 AM
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p.1 #10 · @ the tracks


Steve Wan wrote:
What exactly is the lower girl supposed to be doing?


Waiting for the 3:10 to Yuma.. of course. It's two chicks man...

Not sure that girl should be squating down though. Got some junk in her trunk..



Nov 21, 2009 at 08:20 AM
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p.1 #11 · @ the tracks


I like them but I agree you should do some PP burning on the upper part of the standing gals blouse, shoulder and hair. 2 doesn't work for me as you are losing color and contrast which you can recover in PP. Hot gals, hope there is more.

Dave



Nov 21, 2009 at 08:39 AM
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p.1 #12 · @ the tracks


Good shots, but the white cloud? in the sky in one looks too square to be real. It is a distraction.
Ray



Nov 22, 2009 at 09:47 AM
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p.1 #13 · @ the tracks


friscoron wrote:
I think they're competing too much with that building to the left. For whatever reason, I want to see a tighter shot of the girls. I'm not sure what the shot is trying to say.

They are very attractive, but not so sure I would have waited two hours for anyone. I am interested to see what other shots you have.


This.



Nov 22, 2009 at 06:55 PM





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