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Archive 2009 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?

  
 
bensassophotog
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p.1 #1 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


Just looking for whatever feed back you care to give. If you don't like them, let me know why!

Thanks!

1.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2674/4030759286_8b9c99513d.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2633/4030022853_e5c9b224c5.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3508/4030774098_434ffc4825.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2620/4030773356_0ab612cb6e.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2422/4030016575_30e73759a6.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2581/4030769380_c86528acfe.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2430/4030012495_806b0b5d2c.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2719/4030767212_2cb39fdf79.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2774/4030009337_f794433713.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2683/4030762292_6568384bac.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3489/4030024359_f9225fb597.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2752/4030003957_4316769d71.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2541/4030758682_e67638fde0.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3522/4030002783_91c10394bc.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3519/4030001717_cc9ab667d8.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3520/4030001481_d593b1bdbc.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2760/4030755068_8179e13383.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2546/4030754368_293c5796c3.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2694/4029993057_74bc9d4546.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2458/4029990487_d4e72fa572.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3529/4029989927_ed45d50ba0.jpg

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-Ben Sasso
www.bensasso.com



Nov 19, 2009 at 01:56 PM
Jim Rickards
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p.1 #2 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


I find many of your cropping/compositional choices quite unusual. Almost like somebody bumped you just before the shot.
21 shots - that's quite a lot. If you want a critique, choose a few of your fav's and post them. That will usually get you better feedback.



Nov 19, 2009 at 02:05 PM
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p.1 #3 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


Hi Ben, I think you did a good job of capturing the carefree nature of a day out on the water.

I find your choice of crops in a few to be a bit unfortunate. Specifically, #1, #3 and #4 have heads chopped off, and I think those images would have been better if they were not cropped in such a way.

#8 doesn't do much for me.

There are some blown-out skies, but I suspect you did that deliberately. The images are a bit small to know for sure, but the focus looks spot-on. And I think the expressions and mood captured are excellent. Nice job!



Nov 19, 2009 at 02:20 PM
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p.1 #4 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


A lot of these look like they could be for a Ralph Lauren ad. Nice captures.


Nov 19, 2009 at 02:26 PM
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p.1 #5 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


You crazy rule breaker!

I like them...even the funky crops. It makes them feel less posed to me.

Thanks for sharing!



Nov 19, 2009 at 02:27 PM
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p.1 #6 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


Haha. hk you just made me laugh.

Thanks for the feed back everyone. I agree about SOME of the headchopping. Especially number one.

Thanks for the ralph lauren comment. haha.

As for the blown out skies, I actually just bought a polarizer because I think this shoot would have been stronger with some deep bue skies.



Nov 19, 2009 at 02:37 PM
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p.1 #7 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


Cool video too. Was the video shot with your dslr or did you have a dedicated video camera for that?

Thanks,

Brian



Nov 19, 2009 at 02:55 PM
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p.1 #8 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


Like the DOF in your shots, no EXIF any particular lens or settings for these shots ?


Nov 19, 2009 at 02:57 PM
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p.1 #9 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


BK: Thanks. The video was shot on my 5d II

SJMD: I used two 5d II's for this shoot. one with an 85mm 1.2l II and the other with 35mm 1.4l . I usually shoot around f2.



Nov 19, 2009 at 03:14 PM
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p.1 #10 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


these have a great commercial feel to them... I could see them being used for somewhere like pac sun. good stuff.


Nov 19, 2009 at 04:12 PM
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p.1 #11 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


That video is amazing. The images are great too. Really making me want a 5dII. Thanks for the info!


Nov 19, 2009 at 04:55 PM
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p.1 #12 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


Thanks. You wont regret getting one! I didnt think I would use video...but its rad


Nov 19, 2009 at 09:49 PM
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p.1 #13 · SAILING -pics and vid: FEEDBACK?


I like to look at photos that make me say, "hey, this person thinks a little differently." These are very nicely done with a refreshing viewpoint. I'll look at 21 of those for every single boring photo I see any day. Thanks for posting and I'll be looking for more from you, Ben. I like them quite a bit.

And forget the polarizer for shots like these. That stark sky really does your models well.

Bill

photo-synthesis



Nov 19, 2009 at 09:51 PM





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