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Dajavu wrote:
Very nice overall.
I'm not a people pro shooter so take the following as an amateur's, or even just a viewer's standpoint:
I know there's a lot of discussion in FM about whether or not the top of heads should be cut off or not, and I usually don't mind one way or the other, except in this instance to me it feels like there should have been a little room above. Not much, just not cut off. But that's just personal taste. The only other thing is the shadow on her forearm making the arm hair stand out. A little more fill light, and/or maybe having her arm turned either more or less may have prevented that.
David
Thank you for the input. I agree with your assessment about the arm, I am trying desperately to improve the look of the arm in PS, perhaps success will come eventually. As far as decapitation, I am a strong advocate for the removal of the tops of heads--any amount of space above the head in most cases drives me to consider things other than the subject. Also in this image I grappled with where to crop the legs, I think I am happy with where i arrived. Derek
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