The pose is nice, but the way her left (our right) arm looks, looks odd. Maybe just a little towards the camera more. She looks to be wearing dark, smokey eye make-up, but still looks like her eyes could use some more light.
I think I'm part of a minority as I find fashion poses repulsive. I find them way too abnormal and that they contort the body into unattractive positions.
devisor wrote:
about the pose.. I think you have to look on what kind of image you are viewing.. A normal wedding setting, one would not pose the bride like this..
A good question would be what "normal" setting would warrant a pose like this?
The background elements, horizontal lines and such are bothersome and competing with the model. I would bring down the top half of the wall to the floor to cover these distracting elements.
don't rember what the "I" stands for..