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p.1 #1 · Thirsty (nsfw)

I've only posted a few photos here before, here is one from my latest photo-shoot. Its part of a larger set that will eventually be a coffee table book for a kinky coffee shop in San Fransisco.

http://playvice.com/MaggiePub.jpg

C&C positive and negative welcome and wanted.

Nov 16, 2009 at 11:01 AM

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p.1 #2 · Thirsty (nsfw)

Sorry, though the lighting, focus and elements of the photograph are fine, not something I want to look at.

best

steve

Nov 16, 2009 at 01:19 PM

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p.1 #3 · Thirsty (nsfw)

Obviously humor is an element in this scene as I laughed when I saw this. i'm just wondering why the young lady has such an extreme thirst.. Was the coffee that bad? Good thing she removed her dress for fear that she may get something on it while diving into the public bathroom sink.

good lighting

Nov 16, 2009 at 03:06 PM

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p.1 #4 · Thirsty (nsfw)

looks more like she is puking,...

Nov 16, 2009 at 03:32 PM

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p.1 #5 · Thirsty (nsfw)

My first impression of this was 'vintage' due in part to the fixtures, heels and hair. Then the "wash hands" sign came into focus and ruined it for me. Easy fix if that is what you were trying for...

Nov 16, 2009 at 04:17 PM

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p.1 #6 · Thirsty (nsfw)

yup, "throwing up" was my first impression...

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Nov 16, 2009 at 04:22 PM

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p.1 #7 · Thirsty (nsfw)

SJMD wrote:
Sorry, though the lighting, focus and elements of the photograph are fine, not something I want to look at.

best

steve

+1

Nov 16, 2009 at 05:12 PM

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p.1 #8 · Thirsty (nsfw)

have to agree with SJMD and cre55107

"Sorry, though the lighting, focus and elements of the photograph are fine, not something I want to look at."

"looks more like she is puking"

Nov 16, 2009 at 05:26 PM

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p.1 #9 · Thirsty (nsfw)

Puking was not what I was after, but I understand now that you mention it.. Also, yes, I will probably remove the wash hands sign, wasn't exactly going for vintage, but I think it does take away from the photo.

Still open for more C&C, thank you to everyone who has had comments so far.

Nov 16, 2009 at 06:02 PM

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p.1 #10 · Thirsty (nsfw)

I thought it was pretty cool! If you were going for a "licking from a dripping faucet" look, I would have put more light on the subject's mouth area though.

Nov 16, 2009 at 11:57 PM

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p.1 #11 · Thirsty (nsfw)

works for me. . .

Nov 16, 2009 at 11:59 PM

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p.1 #12 · Thirsty (nsfw)

Is her nose stuck in the faucet?

Nov 17, 2009 at 12:43 AM

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p.1 #13 · Thirsty (nsfw)

loved it...loved the fact that she is hanging in the air

Nov 17, 2009 at 03:26 AM

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p.1 #14 · Thirsty (nsfw)

Pfiltz wrote:
Is her nose stuck in the faucet?

is yours?

Nov 17, 2009 at 03:30 AM

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p.1 #15 · Thirsty (nsfw)

I don't "get it."

Nov 17, 2009 at 05:21 PM

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p.1 #16 · Thirsty (nsfw)

Alan Kefauver wrote:
I don't "get it."

Your not suppose to

It's a nek'd chik

Nov 17, 2009 at 05:33 PM

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p.1 #17 · Thirsty (nsfw)

I could understand the nudity in this photo if we were to focus on her nudity or the body in some fashion, but that doesn't seem to be the case. The focus seems to be more on the action (I guess it's supposed to be drinking, but as many other people said, it looks like vomiting) and locale, which is why the entire bathroom is in focus (24mm, 38mm equivalent at f/22). Moreover, the nudity is rather out of place in such a locale (people don't usually strip to their heels in public restrooms).

But, even if the focus of the shot was on the nudity, it still made me scratch my head. None of the goodies are showing, so it's not like we're focusing on the model's body parts or sexuality. The photo isn't making the viewer focus on a specific part, or the body as a whole or trying to extrapolate some sort of texture, contour, shape, etc of the body. Now, I understand it's for a "kinky" coffee shop, but none of the body parts are showing, so it doesn't really seem all that kinky to me.

It seems like an (odd) pose with nudity thrown in for the sake of it all.

That's my opinion on it.

Nov 17, 2009 at 07:34 PM

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p.1 #18 · Thirsty (nsfw)

Love the concept. Love the heels! Wow. It's not quite "there" but I certainly think you should keep going with the series/concept. Develop it further.

Nov 19, 2009 at 04:24 PM

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p.1 #19 · Thirsty (nsfw)

i like it! a lot! love the location and the implied nudity. i also like the fact that people don't get it. it gives me a Terry Richardson vibe and that's a good thing in my book.

Nov 25, 2009 at 09:22 PM

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p.1 #20 · Thirsty (nsfw)

cool

Nov 25, 2009 at 09:58 PM

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p.1 #21 · Thirsty (nsfw)

derthax wrote:
SJMD wrote:
Sorry, though the lighting, focus and elements of the photograph are fine, not something I want to look at.

best

steve

+1

Why would you give +1 to a critique about what someone wants or does not want to look at? This is just a personal opinion and has nothing to do with constructive criticism. I give it a -10 because it adds nothing to help. to the original poster of the comment, your spelling is fine, but comments like this are not what I want to read. In other words, who cares what I like to and do not like to read. Likewise, I could care less what you like to look at. Tell me something about the image that helps me.

I think it's a fabulous shot. It's interesting, sexy, strange, all in one. Lighting is fine. Pose is different in a god way. Nice job.

Nov 26, 2009 at 01:33 AM

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p.1 #22 · Thirsty (nsfw)

alkaline wrote:
i like it! a lot! love the location and the implied nudity. i also like the fact that people don't get it. it gives me a Terry Richardson vibe and that's a good thing in my book.

+1

Nov 26, 2009 at 01:40 AM

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p.1 #23 · Thirsty (nsfw)

This is interesting in its absurdity. I think it has served its purpose to get the viewer brainstorming what led to the action.

Nov 26, 2009 at 01:42 AM

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p.1 #24 · Thirsty (nsfw)

I really like the sharp edge this picture creates, I do not know if there is an 'Urban' format in photography? But if this was dona as a series, I would love to see the other shots.
Very telling.

Nov 26, 2009 at 02:42 AM

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Nov 26, 2009 at 02:42 AM


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