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One of the few black and whites that I have created in a while. I realize it might come off as too busy to some. I've found myself slightly bored lately with shooting trees and such, so I went to Niagara Falls today to walk around. And what do I come back with, but a tree! I wasn't outfitted to shoot in the heavy mist that was coming off the falls today, so I only went as far as the brink and not much further down.

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Nov 15, 2009 at 10:58 PM

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p.1 #2 · Tree and Light - stark BW

I like this quite a bit. The composition seems solid, especially with the contrast between the bent tree and the perpendicular lamp post. I do find myself wish it had more contrast with more true blacks in the image. YMMV

Nice work!

Nov 15, 2009 at 11:34 PM

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p.1 #3 · Tree and Light - stark BW

Beautiful ! I wonder why is it in a shape like this. Too much ice in the winter ?

Nov 16, 2009 at 12:57 AM

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Indeed Lazlo, you are right, ice could certainly be the cuplrit. In this area near the falls the fallng mist coats everything and, while making it look like quite a sparking winter wonderland, can get quite thick. Thanks for your comment, much appreciated.

Thank you as well simdoc1. I had already upped the blacks quite a bit actually, perhaps I should have another look. Thanks again!

Nov 16, 2009 at 01:26 AM

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My own personal preference would be for a slightly wider shot with the tree and light filling half to two thirds of the width, but not knowing what distractions may be to the left maybe it isn't possible.

I do like the way the tree angles out from the bottom right of the frame and the light pole seems to anchor it.

I agree with simdoc1 in that blacker blacks might help.

Andrew

Nov 16, 2009 at 09:22 PM

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p.1 #6 · Tree and Light - stark BW

Very beautiful! I like your composition a lot. Great mood

Nov 16, 2009 at 11:41 PM

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p.1 #7 · Tree and Light - stark BW

Thanks for the comments Andrew, Tim.

You're right in your assumption Tim, didn't have much room to the left here - fence turned towards me and had some other not so pleasing shrubbery/random weeds/foliage escaping over it.

I did end up making the blacks slightly blacker. Didn't prep a for web version of that though, but thanks for the suggestions.

Tim, I'm glad that you enjoy it!

Thanks again

Nov 17, 2009 at 02:36 AM

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p.1 #8 · Tree and Light - stark BW

Charming.

Nov 17, 2009 at 02:39 AM

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p.1 #9 · Tree and Light - stark BW

That tree has had a hard life. Well presented.

Cheers Ray

Nov 17, 2009 at 03:15 AM

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p.1 #10 · Tree and Light - stark BW

Thanks Kaden, Ray.

Nov 18, 2009 at 01:25 PM


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