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I think the post-processing suggestions AuntiPode made are right on.
However, the first is just too busy for me as is, even with blurring the background. I'd suggest a BW conversion with lightening the greens to take out some of the busy-ness. Happy to post an example.
Second is a nice composition. Again, I echo AuntiPode's recommendation. Kaden's re-work took down some of the feather detail in the body. I would suggest you preserve the detail.
Scott
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