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This was taken while I was having my boys get ready for some pictures.
I always ask my children not to smile no matter what. I find, in a passive aggressive way, it is the best way to get the smiles later on.




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thanks and have a great day

steve


Nov 14, 2009 at 03:22 PM
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I like everything about the shot ...except it has a flat look to it. Maybe this was what you were going for? I pulled the shot in to PS... it is greyscale at the moment.

What are your thoughts?
Hatch


Nov 14, 2009 at 03:33 PM
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p.1 #3 · Attitude


Midtones....

It looks "flat" to me too.


Nov 14, 2009 at 06:00 PM
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p.1 #4 · Attitude


Went back and look - you guys are right.

how about this



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Nov 14, 2009 at 06:35 PM
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p.1 #5 · Attitude


worlds better!

love it

greg


Nov 14, 2009 at 06:37 PM
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p.1 #6 · Attitude


Thanks everyone- somehow I missed that

feel free to ps and repost


Nov 14, 2009 at 06:39 PM
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p.1 #7 · Attitude


I like the second one Nice job!

Just playing around.... added a "S" curve to the shot... played around until I liked it... not sure if you will.

Original.... your adjustment...mine on the bottom.



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Nov 14, 2009 at 07:30 PM
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p.1 #8 · Attitude


FWIW, the last edit is the best...IMO

the blacks are truer black, etc

greg


Nov 14, 2009 at 07:37 PM
 



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p.1 #9 · Attitude


hatch1921

I like what you did.
I will have to try latter to match it.
I am just starting BW - but I am sure this would have helped in color as well.

Thanks for taking the time

steve


Nov 14, 2009 at 08:13 PM
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p.1 #10 · Attitude


IMHO, I liked the first, by far, best of all. While the face is flat, the attitude stands out in sharp relief. When the face is given more contrast and feature, it becomes the primary point of interest rather than the attitude. I like your title. It fit. Of course, it all depends on what you're going for.

Nov 15, 2009 at 04:28 AM
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p.1 #11 · Attitude


Steve, to start with, Good Capture! Nice shot. I like the expression and his overall look.

Your tweak to adjust the midtones was a pretty good job. Just comparing those two, the second was far better.

Then Hatch jumped in with his version. Wow. Now the shot looks three dimentional. (Chuck would be proud)

So, Hatch. Now you are obligated to post your processing steps here on this thread so the rest of us can learn how you did that. No excuses! Post up.



Nov 15, 2009 at 12:08 PM
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p.1 #12 · Attitude


Nice portrait. I cranked the contrast even more. Here it is:








Nov 15, 2009 at 05:15 PM
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p.1 #13 · Attitude


the freckles are adorable and more prominent the higher the contrast, however with the most recent edit you've lost black detail in the hair.

i'd keep the high contrast, but brush it off his hair.


Nov 15, 2009 at 10:32 PM
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p.1 #14 · Attitude


quick edit
http://docs.google.com/File?id=dhc4bzt3_1s3c52k5h_b

Edited on Nov 20, 2009 at 03:54 PM · View previous versions


Nov 20, 2009 at 03:49 PM
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p.1 #15 · Attitude


I dunno ... your edits are better, but he still looks like you. ;-)



Nov 20, 2009 at 03:53 PM
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