A silent glee

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p.1 #1 · A silent glee

Portland Oregon shopping mall parking lot. A tiny, tiny traveling carnival, and a delighted girl watching the fun.
Scanned from an old print.
(Have you a preference regarding the three interpretations?)

2012 © Charlie Shugart

Nov 12, 2009 at 05:13 PM

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p.1 #2 · A silent glee

The first is too washed out for my taste. I like the contrast on the little girl in the third, but the heads also become more prominent. Maybe localize the contrast just on the girl so the heads fade more into the background. Or try to to blur them a little more.

John

Nov 12, 2009 at 05:46 PM

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p.1 #3 · A silent glee

Hang the shingle now.

"Charlie Shugart. Kid Photography."

Another great smile captured. I prefer the first, but would honestly try to get something between 1 and 2.

-Tim

Nov 13, 2009 at 01:16 AM

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p.1 #4 · A silent glee

Thanks for the feedback.
Tim, are you thinking more like 1.45, or 1.55 on that?

Charlie

Nov 13, 2009 at 03:20 AM

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