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asparkes Offline Upload & Sell: On p.1 #1 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! Nother' e-sesh Shot her sister's wedding in 2008. Good people. Good times. The usual. Used the Lastolite Ezbox a bit on this one. Liking it. CC welcome. Off to play some COD, peeps. TIA -Adam 1 Just realized that said softbox is obstructing the far most region of this one. No need to tell me. 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 too "flashy"? 9 10 Nov 11, 2009 at 10:02 PM

stillresonance Offline Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #2 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! Nice set. Only a couple nit picks, just my non-pro opinion so take it for what it's worth #1 crop feels a little bit off, maybe just crop from the left to get the couple further from the center. #8 not too "flashy" but maybe you can bring up the shadows a little bit if it doesn't bring out too much grain. There is cut off fingers on bottom of the frame. BTW I see you're in metro detroit, I'm over on the east side. Nov 11, 2009 at 10:30 PM

Aron Goss Offline Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #3 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! 4 & 9 are great Adam! I say yes to your ? on #8. I started using the same softbox a couple weeks ago due to the wind eating my umbrellas. I prefer the umbrellas actually but the portability of the softbox is a win. Nov 11, 2009 at 11:58 PM

asparkes Offline Upload & Sell: On p.1 #4 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! Thanks, Aron. I find the light out of the soft box to be a little nicer, but it is sort of intangible. I just like that it has less spill. Portability helps, too. Stillresonance, Royal Oak here, dude. I guess there are a few Detroit FMers still around? Nov 13, 2009 at 02:15 AM

jfinite Offline Dedicated FM Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #5 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! Cute shots, some of them seem a little soft, maybe compression. I grew up in Detroit, but I've been in Charlotte for 10 years. Nov 13, 2009 at 07:58 PM

Andrew Welsh Offline Dedicated FM Upload & Sell: On p.1 #6 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! 9 FTW. Some of them look a little soft-- web resizing w/o sharpening probably. Or could be my crappy work monitor. Nov 13, 2009 at 08:17 PM

DB Offline Dedicated FM Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #7 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! I am going to comment on these. We have two weddings this weekend - so it might be monday =( Nov 14, 2009 at 01:14 PM

XPO239 Offline Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #8 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! Lots of good emotional connection with this set. #4 and 5 is my favorite. Yes, I think #8 is too "flashy". I think more ambient light would have improved that image. ~ari Nov 14, 2009 at 11:29 PM

asparkes Offline Upload & Sell: On p.1 #9 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! Yes, it is becoming apparent to me that I am perhaps loosing a hair too much quality on my web downsizing. Thanks for the comments, all. Nov 16, 2009 at 01:05 AM

jeremy_clay Offline Dedicated FM Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #10 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! I find 6 too blue for the rest of the set, is my piece. Nov 16, 2009 at 01:10 AM

DB Offline Dedicated FM Upload & Sell: Off p.1 #11 · I am out of clever titles. Just look, gosh darn it! I've been so slow to comment! 2, 4, 6, 9 are my faves! 1 is really nice - I'm not a huge fan of flashed at sunset photos (no matter who does them - including Ed's or Tony's). I still take these shots because people want them... I love 2, but I might like it a bit more if it was exposed about 1 stop lower. Nice use of light and composition 3 has some really nice expressions - I have a hard time shooting with the sun - I usually don't like the results - I think maybe these could be warmed up a tad? 4 is a really sweet shot - no crits! 5 has cute expressions and interactions ,but I can't get over that tree! 6 I love their expressions and the light -even if it was flashed. Not my style, but you pulled it off really well 7 is a tad too flashy for my taste. With this shot I think you would be better off either snooting your flash and only lighting them up, or lighting everything up equally. I also think it would pop a tad more with a slight increase in warmth. Great concept! They will LOOOOVE it 8 I like the concept - it's a tad too flashy and I think you need to warm it up a tad. Maybe that's a thing with me... Awesome shot though - I wish I came up with these concepts! 9 is really nice. I need to use ambient light more often in my night shots I guess the way you can add this to your next set is to bring the couple a tiny way away from the wall, then get their shadows in focus. That may be a nice way to build on this shot! 10 - nice ring shot! Very cute! Nov 17, 2009 at 04:17 PM

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