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Archive 2009 · Need help with baby pic

  
 
furiousangel
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p.1 #1 · Need help with baby pic


I like everything about this image in terms of composition, but was hoping someone on here could help me with suggestions on how to improve it, particularly the fact that it's out of focus.

What would be the best way to sharpen this image?

It also feel that it has a considerable amount of noise. I thought about fixing with a softening filter like gaussian blur, then sharpening the eyes, hair, lips, nose, etc..

Also, does it appear too red or warm? I'm sorta mixed about it.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2792/4093545417_e5556547ab_b.jpg



Nov 10, 2009 at 08:00 PM
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p.1 #2 · Need help with baby pic


I like what you did with the skin tone. Much better. With sharpening, the noise becomes more apparent (as expected). When I use noise reduction on lightroom, things lose their sharpness. Suggestions...or will I have to accept the grain to make the pic more in focus?


Nov 10, 2009 at 08:38 PM
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p.1 #3 · Need help with baby pic


It might be a bit over-sharpened. I didnt take the time to really work to reduce noise, mask over skin. Just a quick job. I did reduce clarity slightly, which softens some noise. I did bump luminance noise reduction and less so color noise reduction in LR, but the effects are subtle.
A larger original is less likely to show artifacts of sharpening and could be worked on further, with better results. If you print, especially on a matte paper, the "grain", noise will be less apparent.
Scott



Nov 10, 2009 at 08:44 PM
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p.1 #4 · Need help with baby pic


That finishes it off nicely, Karen.

Scott



Nov 11, 2009 at 03:04 PM
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p.1 #5 · Need help with baby pic


Thanks to both of you for your help! I like the finishing touches and suggestions. Made the picture look much better.


Nov 11, 2009 at 09:36 PM





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