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timcorbeel
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p.1 #1 · Soul wandering

I'm experimenting with multiple exposures.
Any comments/critiques are appreciated.

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Nov 07, 2009 at 01:34 PM

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p.1 #2 · Soul wandering

Well done in a creepy way.

The puddle adds greatly to the shot, but all elements work together.
A possibility? Have a little more distance between the figures. And if you could have them become lighter and more ghostly as they become more distant, that might be cool. Just a couple of idle thoughts.
Charlie

Nov 07, 2009 at 04:17 PM

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p.1 #3 · Soul wandering

Thank you for the tips Charlie!

Nov 07, 2009 at 05:04 PM

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p.1 #4 · Soul wandering

Was just considering trying one of these today.
Very nicely done, in my opinion.

-Tim

Nov 08, 2009 at 02:44 AM

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p.1 #5 · Soul wandering

Terrific exposure(s) and good composition. Hope you keep experimenting.

Nov 08, 2009 at 05:04 AM

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p.1 #6 · Soul wandering

Works very well with me. Love the lighting and the mood here

eric

Nov 08, 2009 at 09:35 AM

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