Ther is a lot going on in this shot
exactly what message are you trying to project?
my recomendations and feelings about the image could easily change
are you showing the person, telling a story, thought it was cool
it is just not clear to me.
I liked it more after I slid it over to crop off the clutter of the left side of the building. Without that corner wall & outside clutter I was drawn to the portrait in the center
SJMD wrote:
Ther is a lot going on in this shot
exactly what message are you trying to project?
my recomendations and feelings about the image could easily change
are you showing the person, telling a story, thought it was cool
it is just not clear to me.
Thats it. Done. Of course I could say that I think the tint is too much in the highlights, and shadows need a bit too, and that it s too much. I will pick and choose my battles.