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C.Rosenthal
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p.1 #1 · Daisy

Nov 06, 2009 at 10:21 PM

SJMD
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p.1 #2 · Daisy

Ther is a lot going on in this shot
exactly what message are you trying to project?
my recomendations and feelings about the image could easily change
are you showing the person, telling a story, thought it was cool

it is just not clear to me.

Nov 07, 2009 at 12:12 AM

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p.1 #3 · Daisy

TO me that is what makes it a picture that will be looked at more than one time. I like it.

Nov 07, 2009 at 12:20 AM

C.Rosenthal
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p.1 #4 · Daisy

Thought it looked different. The shack alone holds my interest.

Nov 07, 2009 at 12:41 AM

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p.1 #5 · Daisy

Whats the purpose of this image? Is it for the client or you?

That being said, and without an answer, my initial impressions are.

Not enough direction in the image. I have no idea where to look and it is cluttered. The toning is abrasive.

Not a fan.

Nov 07, 2009 at 10:42 AM

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p.1 #6 · Daisy

I liked it more after I slid it over to crop off the clutter of the left side of the building. Without that corner wall & outside clutter I was drawn to the portrait in the center

Nov 07, 2009 at 06:27 PM

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p.1 #7 · Daisy

Like this?

This image is copyrighted by the owner

I like it better, this way.

Nov 07, 2009 at 07:02 PM

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p.1 #8 · Daisy

i agree with the crop idea. no background, just wall and her. move the left crop over to the pipe.

Nov 07, 2009 at 07:20 PM

C.Rosenthal
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p.1 #9 · Daisy

I prefer the crop I posted, to be honest. I have seen both, and I like the extra element.

Nov 08, 2009 at 08:40 AM

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p.1 #10 · Daisy

SJMD wrote:
Ther is a lot going on in this shot
exactly what message are you trying to project?
my recomendations and feelings about the image could easily change
are you showing the person, telling a story, thought it was cool

it is just not clear to me.

You should critique books not pictures =).

Nov 08, 2009 at 01:55 PM

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p.1 #11 · Daisy

Just another crop.
This image is copyrighted by the owner

Nov 09, 2009 at 02:02 AM

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p.1 #12 · Daisy

Thats it. Done. Of course I could say that I think the tint is too much in the highlights, and shadows need a bit too, and that it s too much. I will pick and choose my battles.

Nov 09, 2009 at 02:38 AM


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