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nick pro
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p.1 #1 · Some Senior portraits

I'm not why my camera left strobe didn't go, but I dont really mind.
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Nov 06, 2009 at 12:40 PM

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p.1 #2 · Some Senior portraits

I like these good all round shots, solid but could be improved
1 fine but needs more expression from subject, bridge distracts even of out of focus
2 & 3 framing I feel could be better but like idea and lighting
4 legs need to be to one side or other
5 maybe focus on eyes rather than leaves use of wider apature

Keep up the good work

Nov 06, 2009 at 11:51 PM

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p.1 #3 · Some Senior portraits

You're doing good work. Keep it up.

In #4, try a little higher angle, so it's not so much "upskirt", It's not bad at all, and I don't see anything that even a very conservative bathing suit wouldn't show, however some folks may get hung up on it.

There's suggestions to build a pose from the ground up, even if the feet aren't showing, or the person is sitting.

Nov 08, 2009 at 04:41 AM

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p.1 #4 · Some Senior portraits

Your flash is just too much for me. It doesn't create enough mood for my taste. It actually ruins it. Try softening the light more and controlling the spill better. It needn't light the entire person.

Nov 08, 2009 at 05:41 AM


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