The weather wasn't working for us here. Back-lighting certainly didn't help (did the best we could), and the wind gave us some stray hairs (that, in retrospect, could be fixed). Otherwise, I thought it pretty good.
Feel free for honest C&C. However, I'd ask you to not judge my model too harshly. There's a connection from my heart to hers (and vice versa).
Montelle - My model was upset that other people were near "her" spot. There are a few "happier" pictures, but this one seemed to be one of the best. Backlighting a black dog, it turns out, doesn't work too well (biggest lesson from this shoot). While that seems completely obvious now, at the time, it didn't seem so bad.