I like the shot, but the PP needs a bit of work. The subjects get a little lost in the image. Maybe a little more contrast and little brighter on the subjects?
I think the PP fits the image I expect from what I see and the surroundings.
I feel this is well done on many levels
the wall of the bridge is coming out of the corner of the photograph and leads us up to the couple.
it has a wonderful mystic misty the feel to the moment
and I can feel the emotion of the moment.
SJMD wrote:
I think the PP fits the image I expect from what I see and the surroundings.
I feel this is well done on many levels
the wall of the bridge is coming out of the corner of the photograph and leads us up to the couple.
it has a wonderful mystic misty the feel to the moment
and I can feel the emotion of the moment.
j.curtis wrote:
I like the shot, but the PP needs a bit of work. The subjects get a little lost in the image. Maybe a little more contrast and little brighter on the subjects?
Real close to a great shot IMO.
Yup, I agree. It's a great capture
There's an awful lot of textured real estate in the composition, that diminishes the impact of the kiss.
Consider cropping off some from the left side to to bring the couple to the center or center left. The point about the rail is well taken - that might allow center left.
just my .02
Nov 04, 2009 at 04:49 PM
Andre Labonte Offline • • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off
A special moment captured makes a fine subject for the picture.
As shown, I find the couple is a little less prominent in the frame than they could be.
My choice (opposite Rags Hef) is to crop the right side. Here are my reasons:
- I find the house on the right a minor visual distraction. My eye goes there and tends not to return to the couple.
- We lose some of the bright sky when the right is cropped.
- The (4) leading lines in the left of the composition return our eye to the subjects when we gaze at the other objects in the frame.
OTOH, it's a fine pic that can stand on its own as is.
