She's cute. I would nevertheless use a PP function to lighten up the bottom
of the image where her chest is. Just too dark. I am not by any means easily
distracted by that area needs some retouching.
She is a lovely gal with a beautiful smile. I think the photo is nice but with the lighting, tone, and shooting angle and your camera height to her head you are creating way to much shadow and puffiness under her eyes and shadow around her cheeks and mouth. Suggestion would be to PP those out a bit and you will have a much better result.
Thanks!, She has permanent ldark circles around her eyes I thinbk bewcause shes anemic? I havent figure out a good way too pp it out in her pictures .. I think its kind of adds her bit of quirkiness although I do unsertand in a model shoot it would be unnacceptable .. Thanks everyone for you input ..