Archive 2009 · Monarch Cat

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p.1 #1 · Monarch Cat

There is outstanding work in this forum, so feel free to give brutal critique.

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http://i433.photobucket.com/albums/qq51/mrchile35/Bugs/moncat2w.jpg

http://i433.photobucket.com/albums/qq51/mrchile35/Bugs/moncat4w.jpg

Oct 29, 2009 at 12:22 PM

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p.1 #2 · Monarch Cat

great composition on last frame

very nice
#2 looks quite dark and focus is slightly "back" on first frame
phil

Oct 29, 2009 at 01:43 PM

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p.1 #3 · Monarch Cat

Love the composition of the third frame

In the first frame you're getting robbed by an out of focus foreground that's distracting, and I agree with Phil on the second.

Oct 29, 2009 at 02:43 PM

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p.1 #4 · Monarch Cat

Hey John,, nice series there

and welcome here

Oct 29, 2009 at 04:34 PM

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p.1 #5 · Monarch Cat

Welcome to the forum/addiction, John. Like your images, 'specially third frame...lovely composition.

Kenny

Oct 29, 2009 at 05:00 PM

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p.1 #6 · Monarch Cat

Thanks for looking and critiquing, Phil, Dtech, Jim, Kenny.

I did darken the background in #2 to try to make the caterpillar pop.Too much maybe? #1 does have a very shallow DOF but I thought I got the eye in focus. Maybe a different crop to get rid of some of the fore ground?

Oct 31, 2009 at 01:14 AM

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p.1 #7 · Monarch Cat

Good series but esp like #3
Brian v.

Oct 31, 2009 at 01:56 AM


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