Rodolfo Paiz
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Yes, the image is quite good. Here's some thoughts to try to improve it even more:
Either my eyes deceive me, or it's tilted to the left a tiny bit. What do you think?
Love the blues. But I feel it's a low-contrast image overall, and even if that's intentional then it's a little more so than I would have preferred. For slightly greater contrast and better color saturation, I'd really suggest going back another night and retaking that same image when you can get a better sky. Not a fan of "replacing" stuff in photography. Also, I'd wait for a slightly darker sky (same reasons: contrast and color saturation, whiter whites in the buildings and so on). Just a little though... if you had taken pictures at 5-minute intervals on that same night, I'd guess that either the next picture (5m later) or the one after that (10m later) would have been perfect.
Also, is there a slightly higher vantage point from which you could shoot? I think a little altitude would be great for this image in terms of perspective and lines.
Finally, the web version does not look as sharp as it could, and should for this purpose. Lacks a bit of "pop" and edge definition. I have no idea whether the print looks exactly like this one, but in this image I'd be a little more aggressive with the sharpening. A little, of course... nothing exaggerated or over-the-top.
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