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_Rob_S_
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p.1 #1 · My First Sports Cover Creation


I threw this together for my son last night. There are a couple of things I'd like to improve upon but I thought I'd ask here for suggestions as well. I do a collage-type thing for the scouts every year, maybe next time I'll do a magazine format.

Thanks for any feedback.



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Oct 19, 2009 at 10:09 PM
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p.1 #2 · My First Sports Cover Creation


Thanks Greg. Ironically, my "prototype" was the current issue of Outside magazine that happen to be sitting here at my computer. Nice one you did! Thanks for the feedback.

Oct 21, 2009 at 02:20 AM
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p.1 #3 · My First Sports Cover Creation


Its too crowded, need some white space.
I would personally also offset the kid and show more ball.

Also font is hard to read, especially with all caps.

Oct 21, 2009 at 03:35 AM
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p.1 #4 · My First Sports Cover Creation


Also play with font placement, alignment and sizes.

Oct 21, 2009 at 03:36 AM




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