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bensassophotog
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p.1 #1 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


The other day I had the chance to work with a model on two different shoots with the same feel to them. We were going for a playful and carefree look. Just looking for any feed back you want to give!

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2509/3935956542_c2245fd0a3_b.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2651/3935905874_d892d64bb2_b.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3497/3944632713_7c2a24a99c_b.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2628/3935902722_7d70641c3f_b.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3464/3935901306_39ce77a768_b.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3430/3935173625_4a4667af29_b.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2628/3935171499_dbf8331bee_b.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2588/3935117531_eaaf873d53_b.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2430/3935112993_d56f48a68c_b.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3514/3935892780_f0dee39b90_b.jpg

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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3458/3935110441_b3c6a54b94_b.jpg

And of course, more on the blog! www.bensasso.com/blog/julia

Edited on Sep 23, 2009 at 10:11 AM · View previous versions



Sep 20, 2009 at 09:24 PM
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p.1 #2 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


I think overall they're very good. I like them. However, for beach shots, the shirt looks REALLY out of place and a little annoying.

In the second bedroom shot, you cropped off the top of her head.



Sep 20, 2009 at 09:29 PM
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p.1 #3 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


WOW!!!! That's the best I can come up with. WOW!!!

Please tell me on pictures 1-6, what lens did you use? Also, did you use flash and/or reflectors? These are just super good

Josiah



Sep 20, 2009 at 09:32 PM
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p.1 #4 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


6 and 9 are my favorites.

Jim F



Sep 20, 2009 at 09:35 PM
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p.1 #5 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


Excellent pictures except the chopped head ones, those make no sense to me.


Sep 20, 2009 at 09:36 PM
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p.1 #6 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


what's with the weird magenta thing coming in from the right of most of the pics? I like the pics but kept wondering what the hell was happening at the right side of the frame.

Did you light the indoor shots with a big white reflector to the right?



Sep 20, 2009 at 09:39 PM
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p.1 #7 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


Thanks guys.
PAWL- are you talking about the open shirt or the yellow one. I love the look of the yellow one but I am iffy on the other.

Josiah- Thanks! if you check out bensasso.com/blog you can see my lighting set up for the bedroom shoot.

Mac- Thanks!

Degnar- Thanks. I do like chopped head ones. dont know why but I do.

Tez- The magenta thing I added in post. some people add flare and I add magenta. go figure. If you check out my blog you can see the lighting set up



Sep 20, 2009 at 10:41 PM
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p.1 #8 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


bensassophotog wrote:
Thanks guys.
PAWL- are you talking about the open shirt or the yellow one. I love the look of the yellow one but I am iffy on the other.

Josiah- Thanks! if you check out bensasso.com/blog you can see my lighting set up for the bedroom shoot.

Mac- Thanks!

Degnar- Thanks. I do like chopped head ones. dont know why but I do.

Tez- The magenta thing I added in post. some people add flare and I add magenta. go figure. If you check out my blog you can see the lighting set up



Hi, mostly talking about the long sleeve shirt. Yellow shirt is OK. Out of curiosity, is she insecure about something?

Again, very nice images.



Sep 20, 2009 at 10:44 PM
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p.1 #9 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


Delightful! Love 6, hate that you cut her head on 8


Sep 20, 2009 at 11:02 PM
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p.1 #10 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


really great set! i just like the overall feel of these.

tim



Sep 21, 2009 at 12:14 AM
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p.1 #11 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


The model is beautiful, and I like the lighting on the indoor shots. Nice processing too, except...
Adding a magenta band on the side of the images...
That's got to be one of the most peculiar, arbitrary bits of "post processing" I've ever seen or heard of.

Btw, are you any relation to Will?



Sep 21, 2009 at 12:24 AM
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p.1 #12 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


I just had a look at your photo blog. GREAT images!
OT: That closeup of the dog... was that with the 24L?



Sep 21, 2009 at 12:30 AM
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p.1 #13 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


Love the overall effect - dislike the details like magenta/cropped heads. Shirt (and model ) are fine with me.


Sep 21, 2009 at 12:32 AM
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p.1 #14 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


Like the second set for color and concept, pretty model. +1 on heads


Sep 21, 2009 at 12:38 AM
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p.1 #15 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


love #6, like to see some more of those great eyes.


Sep 21, 2009 at 02:13 AM
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p.1 #16 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


Number 6 very nice one of the best I've seen on FM
Number 8



Sep 21, 2009 at 02:33 AM
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p.1 #17 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


looks like a girl that is super fun to work with.

I sure hope you saved the images before chopping head and adding magenta - totally ruins them...

Kinda like, I think I will take a sharp picture and blur it in PP "because I like it"

greg



Sep 21, 2009 at 02:50 AM
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p.1 #18 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


There are so many nice aspects to the pictures. However, I went through the whole bunch and couldn't come up with one I really liked.
1,2, & 3 - Long sleeves and magenta cast added. Magenta cast can be cropped away.
3, 4 & 5 - Sunglasses, tilted horizon and facing away from the camera too much (4)
6 I like many aspects of 6, but the way the face is shown, with part of the far eyebrow showing is ruining it for me.
7 & 9 are probably the best of the shoot.
8 & 11 have too much head cut off.
10 Nice aspects to this one too. I like the window in the background. On the whole is seems very unbalanced. She's centered, and the space on the right doesn't seem right, but has to be included due to the elbows in the pose.
Again, there is lots to like here, but lots of little things getting in the way of enjoying these.



Sep 21, 2009 at 05:50 AM
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p.1 #19 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?



overall really great set. Looks like you both had fun, she looks as a fun and humorous person to work with and you captured that well.

My favorites, 6 and 9



Sep 21, 2009 at 06:02 AM
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p.1 #20 · MODEL: Julia...FEEDBACK?


I love them, but have to agree for the shirt in the water, especially the last one...


Sep 21, 2009 at 06:06 AM
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