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mluckasavage
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p.1 #1 · beginning a body of work (CC)

i'm at school, and this isn't the final edit, but i'm just looking for some opinions.

Jul 21, 2009 at 12:10 PM

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p.1 #2 · beginning a body of work (CC)

cool concept , but the background appears to be a bit distracting.

Jul 21, 2009 at 01:52 PM

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p.1 #3 · beginning a body of work (CC)

BG is distracting, the lines going through her head irk me.
The carpet and wall below LH side could do with a fix/clone/burn.

If the curtains were "blowing in the wind" I reckon that would add "drama" to the shoot.

Like the concept.

Cheers Gaz

Jul 21, 2009 at 06:41 PM

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p.1 #4 · beginning a body of work (CC)

I like it as is.

Jul 22, 2009 at 06:48 PM

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p.1 #5 · beginning a body of work (CC)

Striking concept. I agree about the distracting BG esp on the right.

What are the crumbly things on her right skirt? pages crumbling from the book? an old flower? It distracts from her face and from the concept.

I really like your texture, colors and basic composition of the girl.

Nice piece of work.
Chris

Jul 23, 2009 at 12:26 PM


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