Emily Mulder Offline Image Upload: Off
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I'm not an expert, but have also been trying to capture good family photos for a while. I'll give my 2 cents worth and hope it helps :-) There are some nice colors, nice color coordination of clothing, and a neat looking family!
#1 has some good smiles and they look fairly relaxed in front of your camera (just mom looks a little stiff). The background is very pretty. I would have liked to see more posing with that BG. I think you used a flash to light them up, necessary when the light is failing. I've found it helps to warm up the whole photo to kind of even out the flash WB with the BG.
#2 The colors and BG is nice, but they all look a bit stiff or uncertain. Dad looks uncomfortable and like he's trying to find a position. The others are either not smiling or like they are trying to figure out what you want. You might have tried them in that similar position for a few more shots once they got comfortable. (maybe you did?)
#3 I see some nice interaction. In the upper left one the big sister doesn't look happy. It is also a bit cool (like #1). Maybe there is a story to Dad's hand up in the main picture? The B&W looks a little gray to me, but I'm not sure how you'd make it more contrasty and not get too much attention drawn to the white shirts. I'd brighten up the lower left one. The lower right one has big sister looking a bit awkward, but they do all look happier. Dad's position could be with his face looking forward a bit more.
I'd love to see more of your work. I'm always trying to get better at posing people - especially families.
Take care,
Emily
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