I'd like to see the toning in #2 applied to #1. As it is, it appears murky. Of course, maybe the water in #1 is murky, in which case ignore my crit!
-Tim
Jul 05, 2009 at 07:57 PM
Charlie Shugart Offline • • • • • • • Upload & Sell: Off
Bill,
I agree with Tim about the brown toning in the first.
The second photograph is swell (trying to bring that word back).
Both are interesting travel shots, and I hope you will post more.
I visited Cambodia many years ago. Interesting to see that the way of life of some people apparently hasn't changed at all.
Charlie
Charlie Shugart wrote:
Bill,
I agree with Tim about the brown toning in the first.
The second photograph is swell (trying to bring that word back).
Both are interesting travel shots, and I hope you will post more.
I visited Cambodia many years ago. Interesting to see that the way of life of some people apparently hasn't changed at all.
Charlie
Thanks Charlie and Tim - I agree with the both of you. I probably shouldn't have even tried to convert that one to BW ... here is a 're do' and the color one follows
Bill http://twinoakphoto.zenfolio.com/img/v1/p50042753.jpg http://twinoakphoto.zenfolio.com/img/v2/p76460937.jpg
i prefer the last colour shot, maybe try muting the colours apart from the blue shack 20% should do it.
Cheers
Martyn
Thanks for the suggestion Martyn. I was surprised at the colors in the shots she brought back from Cambodia. Even the worst parts had some color that added some beauty to a otherwise desolate scene.
Regards,
Bill
