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p.1 #1 · More fishing - Mozambique

Two more - C&C appreciated

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Jul 03, 2009 at 07:40 PM

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p.1 #2 · More fishing - Mozambique

Oosty,
Not sure if I'd prefer these toned versions over a straight B&W, but both of these are excellent shots.
My preference is the second one because of the DOF and balance of the different elements, as well as the intrinsic benefits of three people making a triangle.
Well done.
Charlie

Jul 03, 2009 at 08:05 PM

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p.1 #3 · More fishing - Mozambique

i think the toning is hurting these quite a lot, its making a warm scene look very cold.

That aside i agree with charlie, the 2nd shot is nicely composed with foreground and background interest.

Cheers

Martyn

Jul 03, 2009 at 08:20 PM

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p.1 #4 · More fishing - Mozambique

+1 for maybe considering a tone change.

I still get a kick out of the giant shark fin in #1

-Tim

Jul 03, 2009 at 10:55 PM

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p.1 #5 · More fishing - Mozambique

Hey Ootsy,

As the others said adding a blue tint to it gives it a "cold" feeling... something I don't feel that is appropriate for this shot. For #1 it feels a little too spread out, Id crop a little off the right. And I am digging #2.

eric

Jul 04, 2009 at 02:06 PM

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p.1 #6 · More fishing - Mozambique

Thanks for the comments - the toning comes from my "playing" with the software - with hindsight I agree completely

Happy 4th everyone.

Jul 04, 2009 at 04:06 PM

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