Beautiful model and nice photos. I agree on the wrinkles on the 2nd photo. I suggest fixing in PP the wrinkles on the white backdrop and also along her back and thigh.
I like them... they look simple but honest, well made and natural. If I was to change anything would be a little bit more air above her head in the first photo, maybe even a little wider so you have the whole hoodie in the frame. Also I thik there's a yellow stain under her belly, might wanna get rid of it. Nice work!
Under the model i placed a blanket,the ground whas very cold and that are the wrinkles under Gwenny.
I know this is not a excuse but i trying not to work with pp
Sorry for my bad englisch.....
In #2, what I notice most is how you set the scene up. She is not just laying there, she's doing something and that makes it look real and unposed.
I noticed the wrinkles too, but then I asked myself why that would be a problem, and how distracting that is. Also, isn't it natural to have wrinkles when you lay on a fabric?
I agree with Spyro P about a bit more room above her head.
Oh, and your English is just fine. Some mistakes but it is very readable and easily understood.
ggleason wrote:
The model is beautiful, the lighting looks good, but I do wonder what she is doing sitting in the water. Gregg
Hello,"what she is doing sitting in the water" its verry hot at the moment in belgium around 90 f ,so its a plaisir to sitting in the water !!
