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Bonjour Y + M. 
All I write below is written in a friendly tone of voice with the sole intent to help.
I write it not to discourage you at all, but rather to ENCOURAGE you to pursue a path that the two of you CAN take because of your partnership in the venture.
The work you two are doing within the Nude Genre is extensive and obviously you are both committed to it and each other.
Many of the images are good. Y does a good job on the camera work, and M does a good job bringing a natural pose and look to the images. Working together you have potential.
But what about this image (and some earlier ones)?
I don't think you two are reaching your real potential with images like this.
Many seem to be "standard pieces" (e.g. Nude in Abandoned Building, Nude Looks in Cracked Mirror, Nude in Doorway, etc.) that one would expect to see in a typical nude portfolio by a typical photographer. In other words, IF one went to a convention of nude photographers and looked at all of their portfolios, I am sure one would find many images similar to this (Nude Woman on Rocks). So, it is a "standard" in the genre. Or...looked at another way (being more critical)...it is an easy thing to copy or emulate. I suggest you avoid that.
The thing about "standard" images like this (in ANY genre) is that they are considered with all the baggage of ALL the other earlier images shown or seen by other photographers. THAT is a LOT of baggage. In other words, your image above has to be considered or WILL BE considered like all the other (countless) similar images.
From my POV, that means that the image will likely be compared to the range of similar images and the viewer will ask themselves, "What is new in this one?"
In short, the choice of a "standard" nude pose or composition or set (e.g. Nude Woman on Rocks, or Nude Woman on Tree Trunk Across Stream, etc.) devolves down to "how pretty is the woman." Because there is often not much else that is different from image to image.
My Simple Suggestion 1: Avoid these "standard" compositions and search for new or less frequently seen compositions. Show us something new.
Or...
Simple Suggestion 2: Take the Standard and raise it to a new level.
This one is the hardest to accomplish because there have been SO MANY images like this made and seen. Because so many look so much alike, there is very little that can be done to distinguish one from another IF one stays with "Nude Woman on Rocks." The most common "difference" is the shape of the rock the woman is draped over or sitting on (see below for more on this), but I don't think that alone raises the image to a new level.
Or...
Simple Suggestion 3: Take the Standard and CHANGE something noticeable to add more interest (with something new). From my POV, this could be something as simple but very powerful as a facial expression...since almost ALL "nude" models seem to adapt the same blank look (very common). Apparently, most photographers just include more of the scene (more of the river, forest, lake shore, ocean and they make a "Landscape with Nude Figure" type of image. Then THOSE things become the difference we notice, not so much the woman.
My General "Simple Suggestion" is not easy to accomplish:
"Show us something we have NOT seen before." That is a big challenge. But, I think YOU TWO can do it. Just use YOUR creativity and avoid emulating something else you (and we) have already seen. Be Different!
My feeling is that the two of you could make images that most will not. Because of your relationship...and because M obviously feels comfortable posing for you with a very natural look.
Good luck and light to you. I hope you find these words encouraging and from a friend, as that is my intent.
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