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Archive 2009 · Critique my shot

  
 
hasanahmad
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p.1 #1 · Critique my shot


This was a pretty basic shot, but I edited it with Adobe Lightroom 2.3

I have a special inkling of getting shots with higher contrast and deep colors. What do you think?

http://www.flickr.com/photos/hasanahmad/3649806232/



Jun 23, 2009 at 10:52 AM
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p.1 #2 · Critique my shot


It's a little too dark for me. The first thing my eyes notice is the lighter blue sky in the horizon which clearly isn't your subject. The entire photo almost looks like a vignette over the lighter blue sky. Maybe you could lighten it up a bit and make the colors pop out a little more?

Edited on Jun 23, 2009 at 11:13 PM · View previous versions



Jun 23, 2009 at 11:42 AM
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p.1 #3 · Critique my shot


Nice shot.
The blues look a bit unnatural and the saturation is a bit too high for me. But there is incredible depth in the sky with excellent contrast. Overall I think its quite good, but I only saw a small sized image.

Scott



Jun 23, 2009 at 06:23 PM
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p.1 #4 · Critique my shot


yes i might have overdone the blues. but it looks better in the bigger picture. this is my 2nd week with working with Adobe Lightroom so hopefully I improve


thanks for the suggestions and comments



Jun 23, 2009 at 11:58 PM
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p.1 #5 · Critique my shot


You are off to a good start.
Looking forward to seeing more, Hasanahmad.

Scott



Jun 24, 2009 at 05:04 AM





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