Archive 2009 · Wandering in SF

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p.1 #1 · Wandering in SF

Hi all,

I'm kind of new to photography and to this forum--this is my first non-buy/sell post. I've learned a lot from reading the other critiques and I'm now hoping you all might be able to give me some constructive criticism. This is my first but be as harsh as you want--just trying to improve

Calvin

PS any ideas for a name?

Jun 23, 2009 at 01:13 AM

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p.1 #2 · Wandering in SF

I like it. My only suggestion would be to perhaps clone out the "I" graffiti in the upper right edge because it distracts.

Ideas for a name? You don't like Calvin? ... Oh, you mean for the image?

Maybe "Heart Strings"?

Jun 23, 2009 at 01:20 AM

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p.1 #3 · Wandering in SF

Haha I was kind of thinking of that name but thought it might be a little cliche...maybe something like "heart chains"?

Jun 23, 2009 at 01:22 AM

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p.1 #4 · Wandering in SF

Perhaps, "The Mailled Heart".

Jun 23, 2009 at 04:27 AM

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p.1 #5 · Wandering in SF

Wrapped up and ready to go.

Union Square.

Jun 23, 2009 at 01:09 PM

JOSH GUNNET
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p.1 #6 · Wandering in SF

keeping love together

Jun 23, 2009 at 04:58 PM

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p.1 #7 · Wandering in SF

I'm not sure I understand what I am seeing.
But I like the image alot. Like the processing, the vignette, the unusual subject and moderately shallow DOF.
The proposed names are great!

scott

Jun 23, 2009 at 07:12 PM


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